I noticed several spelling mistakes and at times you were AWESOME with voice and at other time lacked it. But to the point you had great formatt and lots of well done ressearch!! you did REALLY good!!! :)
You need to work on the punctuation of your posts. Your posts should be in the order that they happened. Like in the fourth post, you repeated twice that Modred killed Arthur, you also said it in the first or second post.
I noticed several spelling mistakes and at times you were AWESOME with voice and at other time lacked it. But to the point you had great formatt and lots of well done ressearch!! you did REALLY good!!! :)
ReplyDeleteYou need to work on the punctuation of your posts. Your posts should be in the order that they happened. Like in the fourth post, you repeated twice that Modred killed Arthur, you also said it in the first or second post.
ReplyDeleteWork on spell and grammer. However there was lots of good info.
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